blueskysummer
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if you can't write it, draw it, or daydream about it, why do you want it?
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Post by blueskysummer on Oct 22, 2009 14:32:40 GMT -8
Rain falling down a weary drizzle people walk by hoods up heads down. I'm one of them for a minute. Then I look up see the beauty pull off my hood throw back my head sticking my tounge to the heavens to catch each drop of happiness they send down to me. I'm different.
School bells ringing. students file out like ants unthinking on the way to the next class eyes glued to white linoleum. I look up my eyes searching picking out faces of friends of strangers making eye contact with those who'd rather not. some look at me strangely. some don't notice. I'm different.
Night falls outside. streetlamps bathe the road in orange. people settle in people say good-night people go to sleep. I'm one of them. but different. I look out the window with a hole in my heart calling searching for something to fill it before crawling into bed. I'm different
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Post by ~*Pikeru on Oct 25, 2009 16:25:09 GMT -8
*stands and claps* BRAVO!!! I personally could connect with one. Nice work Blueskysummer! ^^
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blueskysummer
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if you can't write it, draw it, or daydream about it, why do you want it?
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Post by blueskysummer on Oct 25, 2009 17:02:19 GMT -8
*blushes* aww... thanks! i'm trying to be a writer, and i just plain LOVE poetry. its like talking, but with a rythm (hence odd spacing, i do that for emphasis)
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talguy21
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Post by talguy21 on Mar 29, 2010 19:52:57 GMT -8
Nice poem! it's awesome
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blueskysummer
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if you can't write it, draw it, or daydream about it, why do you want it?
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Post by blueskysummer on Apr 7, 2010 15:14:26 GMT -8
thanks! =)
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